I saw no movie. I am only somewhat familiar with Black & White. Whatever canon is supposed to be, I like this. C: I was only a little lost at the beginning as to what in the world the first paragraph referenced. But that was fine since the rest of the fic didn't really reference it.
Your use of repetition is very effective. Each time you get into details, you bring everything right back to the core issue, truth. I liked this very much!
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I saw no movie. I am only somewhat familiar with Black & White. Whatever canon is supposed to be, I like this. C: I was only a little lost at the beginning as to what in the world the first paragraph referenced. But that was fine since the rest of the fic didn't really reference it.
Your use of repetition is very effective. Each time you get into details, you bring everything right back to the core issue, truth. I liked this very much!